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Set, Anubis, Ammet, and Cerberus: //hanging out at a psychopomp cafe//

Me: //enters the cafe//

//nymphs and dryads eye me nervously//

Me: //reaches into coat pocket, a low squeaky sound is made//

Set, Anubis, Ammet, and Cerberus: //ears perk up//

A dryad: //glares at me//

Me: //pulls out squeaky toy//

//cafe yells//

Me: //throws the squeaky toy//

Set, Anubis, Ammet, and Cerberus: //run after the toy, they knock over a satyr with a latte//

Me: //makes a break for the Underworld//

#microfiction #yoteWriting #fediWriters #fiction #writing #mythology #hellenic

Set, Anubis, Ammet, and Cerberus: hanging out at a psychopomp cafe

Me: enters the cafe

nymphs and dryads eye me nervously

Me: reaches into coat pocket, a low squeaky sound is made

Set, Anubis, Ammet, and Cerberus: ears perk up

A dryad: glares at me

Me: pulls out squeaky toy

cafe yells

Me: throws the squeaky toy

Set, Anubis, Ammet, and Cerberus: run after the toy, they knock over a satyr with a latte

Me: makes a break for the Underworld

#microFiction #fiction #fediWriters

-the mummy

why do they not seek help when they start to get [REDACTED] and then when the first person turns?

im looking over the series of events, just from the outline i can tell this is going to be dark

oh

housemates

1st = Coinín (physicist)
2nd = Kinigl (engineer)
3rd = Bwni (painter)
4th = Karagosh (writer)*

*main plot and narrative told through journals

been dragging my feet, anyway, gonna do some writing yeeeehawww!

without naming the characters i cant proceed with their arc and character development (redundant)

and i think im clever

the names im giving the rabbit folks in my scip are....um....

it might be a bitch for the reader, so im doing my best

#scips

neverending list of shit to watch with vanta:

-steven universe
-watership down
-robot chicken
-aqua teen hunger force
-venture brothers
-wallace and gromit (the whole gambit)

#yoteTrash

Thank you for PM'ing me! My apologies to get back to you so late!

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I like the concept for the object! i wanted to suggest an alternate death/suicide; that may help as a sleight-of-hand for the reader.

My suggestion is that instead of her jumping into the river, she comments on how tired she is and lays down on the river bank. Over a course of 6-12 hours she shrivels up and decomposes.

Content Warning: Depression, Personal

Personally, with depression sometimes I just want to //not exist anymore.// Not suicide, but existing. Those moods I lay down and feel like I'm shriveling up and dying.

An ending that the readers weren't completely expecting will help your character's arc. Overall, this is a suggestion for the ending, a sleight-of-hand.

Also I highly suggest taking Grigori Karpin's advice on the layout and format of the article.
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I am unable to greenlight, but I hope my suggestion and crit have helped!

Feel free to PM me with any questions.

#scips #thecritters #critter

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i miss not being in so much pain
i miss my family, to my surprise,
i miss sleeping all night
i miss going on walks

im so anxious now, that im too afraid to go outside,
im so tired, too tired to sleep the whole night,
im so distant to my love ones, that i forgot what a hug feels like,

im sobbing because im always tired, in pain, isolated, ...alone